Our Last Goodbye

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Our Last Goodbye

Post  Admin on Sun Mar 30, 2008 11:41 am

As you stare at me
I can feel your love
Piercing through my body
Letting you go seems so unreal
My eyes pour out
acid tears that
When they land on the ground
Living turns to ashes
Our last kiss good-bye
was torture
knowing that our lips
Will never touch again
And we will never taste sin
I could not speak
Or ever say good-bye
Words were not needed
When you left and time stood still
And so did my heart


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Whoa!

Post  poetrygirlxxx on Wed Apr 02, 2008 9:31 am

Another amazing poem. You are so good at poetry!!!
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^^

Post  huh? on Sun Apr 06, 2008 6:35 pm

this one has to be my favorite...well as far as the ones I've read from you....
which is this one, so of course it is....without the execption of that
tiny sentance from the gift of the magi sequal. lol
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geez

Post  katie1lunsford on Sun Apr 06, 2008 8:20 pm

That almost made me cry. ha I LOVED I! cheers


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Whoa...

Post  poetrygirlxxx on Sun Apr 20, 2008 9:28 am

I know I already posted a reply,but I read this poem again, ad I'm so impossibly suprised by it (again)
I had to write something else. I love this poem! (even though I feel like I'm about to cry)
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Re: Our Last Goodbye

Post  mOlLaH! on Sat Aug 23, 2008 5:42 pm

WHOAZ!!
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