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Post  queenofspades on Mon Apr 14, 2008 2:56 pm

Crystal tears of the sky
Writing poetry
Not knowing why
Birds singing a morning tune
Happy dreams
The sun coming oh so soon
Quiet reading in the night
Laughing silent
Screaming fright
Sunny morning of the day
Running, running
Far away
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Post  poetrygirlxxx on Mon Apr 14, 2008 4:04 pm

SO GOOD!
Short and sweet and poetic Very Happy
Mine are long and dull and boring Mad
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LONG!

Post  queenofspades on Mon Apr 14, 2008 8:09 pm

no your poems are NOT long and boring...well the boring part anyway, they are really interesting if you ask me the longer ones are usaully better(unless it's like a haiku or soemthing....)


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