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Post  poetrygirlxxx on Mon Apr 14, 2008 3:01 pm

Sometimes I feel like a suicide
When I see those eyes
When I see those eyes
Like I'm caught red-handed
With my lies
With my eyes
I hate not knowing
What to do
And knowing what I want
And who
Inside this heart
Thats bleeding for you
Thats beating for you
Thats breathing for you
And I think I want
All I want
I wonder
and wonder
What you really think
Just tell me before
I fall
Tell me before
I jump
Over the edge
Cause I'm starting to feel
Like I commited a suicide
With your hand in mine
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Post  queenofspades on Mon Apr 14, 2008 3:49 pm

OOOOOOOO bounce Kelly that was SO good!!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
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YYYYAAAAAYYYY!!

Post  poetrygirlxxx on Mon Apr 14, 2008 3:53 pm

TTTHHHHAAANNNKK YYYOOUUUU!
I absolutely LOVE all your poems! theyre so good!
And your pictures really pretty!! Very Happy Razz
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Post  queenofspades on Mon Apr 14, 2008 3:59 pm

huh? what pic? cause the one that's my icon right now is kinda sucky but it was the only one i could find that wouldn't like scare people that didn't know me....

Truthfully i like your poems SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much more than mine, they seem to flow better and they seem deeper.... Very Happy
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Well

Post  poetrygirlxxx on Mon Apr 14, 2008 4:02 pm

I write what I feel cause I dont usually express them in words
But they arent all that great
Yours seem more poetic
Im gonna go to that cyrstal tears one
Go to
what are you thinking in the love poems
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huh?

Post  queenofspades on Mon Apr 14, 2008 8:05 pm

huh? sorry, i'm like totally zonked right now.....so say that question one more time....
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